tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6346856970294229406.post2856896074960076303..comments2024-03-12T09:42:43.266+00:00Comments on FlashFlood: 'The Path of Least Resistance' by Rachael DunlopIngridhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08842484059848853343noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6346856970294229406.post-59367898609704596612013-06-24T16:30:00.534+01:002013-06-24T16:30:00.534+01:00Lovely work, Rachael.Lovely work, Rachael.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6346856970294229406.post-64834468693387716422013-06-23T19:38:04.055+01:002013-06-23T19:38:04.055+01:00Thanks for the lovely comments, everyone. This sto...Thanks for the lovely comments, everyone. This story wasn't so much crafted as a stream of consciousness that I shaped. Amazing what your mind can do without you!Rachael Dunlophttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01867623861097641597noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6346856970294229406.post-87355458681651979112013-06-23T11:30:40.258+01:002013-06-23T11:30:40.258+01:00There are some lovely touches in this, Rachael. Y...There are some lovely touches in this, Rachael. You build a strong atmosphere of someone's reflections after a disaster. Shirley Goldenhttp://www.shirleygolden.netnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6346856970294229406.post-21135788658990154262013-06-23T10:03:38.056+01:002013-06-23T10:03:38.056+01:00I loved the detail in this - particularly the brea...I loved the detail in this - particularly the bread not buttered to the edge and the contrast between the cold ham and warm mayonnaise. Diane Simmonsnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6346856970294229406.post-75201814415841039582013-06-23T09:44:03.067+01:002013-06-23T09:44:03.067+01:00Deep and compelling, like a tide. Beautifully writ...Deep and compelling, like a tide. Beautifully written.broken birohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06233920262119205474noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6346856970294229406.post-33623815914125336832013-06-23T08:08:41.935+01:002013-06-23T08:08:41.935+01:00This is superb. I love the way the memory filters ...This is superb. I love the way the memory filters through the story and the two mingle.<br /><br />The personal sadness is so delicately conveyed amid the disaster and the chaos. BeautifulJen Harveyhttp://www.jenharvey.netnoreply@blogger.com